The wedsite has more information about World War I .
In 1916 some of the most horrible war is happen,the war is happen on the Wastern Front.
The war lasted nine months , France and Germany more than 300000 people were die,and 750000 people wounded.More are die and in Belgium ,the cemetery more them 500000.
I learn wars is too bad because caused by the war many people died.
I think in France and Germany are many soldier die,some of then already has family,so war make a lot of children did has father.
Wars are not a good thing,war make many people did have family.
The war would harm the Earth so the war is a very bad thing.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_War_1
The wedsite has more information about war.
The wedsite say the world war 1 is a very long war,from 1914-1918.The world war 1 is biggest war in history and a lot of soldier and people die.The wedsite said the world war 1 also referred to as WWI.The war mast of the world powers involved in.
In June 8,1914 the assassination of Archduke of Austria heir to the throne of the Austro-Hungarian Empire is be regarded as world war 1 of the culprit.
I read the wedsite I learn the world war 1 how to happen and what time happen ,hae many people die.I think the world war 1 is a very big war.many many people die.I hope the war is best not to happen again because war is a very horrible thing.
Caption1:The picture is France soldiers are ambush.
Caption2:The picturs is fieldof world war 1.
Not bad at all. The spacing is a bit off on some of this. You can work on the editing. Some of the information on the sites you found is a bit difficult for you. It also helps to search around. Try not to focus so much on numbers and facts, but to read about what happened and why.
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